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Comments from Mucker
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-01-07 14:26:29 | School gloryhole | That was really outstanding. Ordinarily I like for writers to use all the tags that apply to each story but in this case I'm glad you didn't because that would have created a spoiler. I kinda assumed how the story would turn out but there was still an element of mystery remaining. Well done! |
| 2012-01-11 02:35:59 | She was 18 but looked like 10 | Good story. I actually liked this concept more than if she had really been 10 years old. The ending was a bit disappointing but ... oh, well, that's life. |
| 2012-01-16 13:47:53 | Katie's dress is too small (corrected) | Good story but sex between step siblings is NOT incest. |
| 2012-01-30 13:44:30 | Two plus One Eguals Trouble | Very good story and I'm looking forward to more sequels. However, it could benefit from some proof reading to correct the writing errors which are distracting. |
| 2012-02-26 01:21:38 | Young love_(3) | It's a sweet story. But based on the length of the build up leading to the couple's sexual encounter, the part of the story describing their sexual activity seemed somewhat rushed. The story would have benefited from expanded and more graphically detailed descriptions of their sexual experience. I also think there should have been more dialogue between them to express their feelings both during and after this first time experience that they shared. |