| 2012-03-16 05:28:48 |
New Neighbor
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I particularly like exhibitionist stories and this one was really hot. |
| 2012-03-21 09:05:43 |
Window Belly
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Great work. I'm usually not a fan of stories involving pregnant teens. But this was sweet, captivating and extraordinarily well done. |
| 2014-08-21 13:46:45 |
Sisterly Love - Part 3
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When and if you continue this story, I urge you not to bring the mom or any other adults into this sexual relationship. And please avoid pregnancy as well. There is practically nothing as big a turn-off as an unwanted teen pregnancy. My suggestion is to introduce a FFM threesome with another teen female. |
| 2012-08-15 10:38:58 |
The Wall_(0)
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I wish it had contained more sexual content but it was still a well conceived and very touching story. |
| 2012-09-13 14:37:59 |
Summertime Part 1
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That was an excellent story and was very well written. I look forward to reading further stories from you. |