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Comments from Mucker
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| 2011-02-12 08:05:53 | A story of teens having sex with each other is not a portrayal of pedophilia. So I seriously doubt that the story in its original form would be subject to deletion under the newly announced policy. Anyway, good story but it could have benefited from more detailed descriptions of the sex that this young couple enjoyed and the feelings they both experienced. I liked the Cinderella theme. |
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| 2011-02-21 05:22:11 | My life Pt 1 | No offense meant but, like others have said, you need to go over some basic English writing and structure rules. Every sentence, for example, should begin with a capital letter and end with a period. These are some simple things that will improve your writing and make your stories much easier to read. |
| 2011-03-27 11:31:19 | Joey, the Next Door Neighbor | I get annoyed with so many other stories on this site that are too far fetched to be believable. But with this story, even though it is labeled as fiction, it was written in a way that makes it thoroughly realistic and believable. That is something which enhances the eroticism in a story like this. And the theme of the story is one that has strong erotic appeal. Excellent job! I hope that you will continue writing more and sharing your stories here. |
| 2011-04-04 15:33:00 | The heat | You should have used the tags for this story to describe the content. Believe it or not, some people find certain themes such as bestiality to be repugnant. |
| 2011-04-12 07:51:11 | THE SIBLINGS chapter 2, Opening moves | Excellent story. Thanks so much for posting it here and also for having the integrity to give credit to the true author. That shows real class. |