| 2009-01-18 05:28:48 |
Swallowing Justin - Part III
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I think you should give just up writing stories and find another hobby. You turned a really good erotic series into an utterly wretched piece of crap by having the old neighbor intruding into the two young kids' affair. |
| 2009-01-28 09:59:32 |
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You are very talented and one of the best writers or this site. Parts 1 & 2 are simply outstanding. Sweet, romantic, erotic and sexy. Your style and descriptions are excellent and the content is thoroughly realistic and credible. Thanks. I'm looking forward to #3 and hopefully more to follow. |
| 2014-06-28 00:27:59 |
My brother, My pimp (Part 2)
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That was excellent. I hope there will be a sequel, maybe featuring a gangbang. |
| 2009-02-19 20:01:42 |
Track and Field Competition
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Good story but I have to say that Judy did at all not act like an inexperienced teenage virgin. If the story is actually true, she must have already been around the block a few times in her life before she boarded that bus with you. |
| 2014-06-27 23:22:17 |
Childhood Friends_(0)
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Excellent work! And very erotic. |