| 2010-12-17 14:45:34 |
Peeking at Stepsister
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Good story but it could benefit from proof reading and spell check. Also some lengthier and more detailed descriptions of the sexual activity would have improved the story and made it more erotic. |
| 2010-12-18 08:37:28 |
My First Time-Age 16
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This is an exceptionally good story. Your descriptions of the sexual activity contain just the right amount of detail to produce a sense of vivid erotic stimulation. And the way that you conveyed your feelings and emotions provided a human touch not often found in this type of story. |
| 2010-12-22 09:05:07 |
I'm Not Alone
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That was thoroughly enjoyable. |
| 2010-12-31 09:01:42 |
The Popular Girl
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Good story. Thanks for sharing it here. And sorry to be nitpicking but owning any part of Cadillac would not be possible. For the next installment, maybe you can find a way for Jordan to improve his social skills. Just a suggestion. |
| 2011-01-11 01:59:26 |
I'm Not Alone, Part III
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This is one of the best multi-part stories on this site. I hope you will continue with more sequels in the future. |