| 2014-08-03 16:01:43 |
My little brother's friend
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The story is basically okay but you really need to brush up on your punctuation and spelling. It's REALLY distracting to try and read a cluster of sentences that neither begin with a capital letter nor end with a period. |
| 2013-07-04 13:56:45 |
Poolside With My Daughter's Friend Amy
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Teen pregnancies are bad enough but pregnancy from an incestuous parent-child relationship is downright sick. |
| 2013-07-10 09:17:39 |
Times in my Life : Part One
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That was an outstanding story. It was very well written and has the perfect balance between the sexual and non-sexual narratives. The sexual descriptions were very erotic. I'll be looking forward to the next parts to follow. |
| 2013-07-27 09:57:38 |
Times in my Life: Part Two
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I am very impressed with your writing talent. This was an excellent sequel in the continuing story. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next installment. |
| 2014-09-07 23:02:29 |
My Sister and I for the First Time part 2
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The story gets a positive rating from me. However, I'm getting a bit weary of hearing a 5'10" 16 y/o girl being referred to as "baby sister" and "little sister." Also, a 4 1/2" erection may be typical for an 11 or 12 y/o kid but that's way undersized for an 18 y/o guy. |