| 2014-09-07 22:25:21 |
My Sister and I for the first time_(0)
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It's funny that some of the comments here which are critical of the writer's errors are themselves written with misspellings and other mistakes. ; ) |
| 2014-09-07 22:18:33 |
My Sister and I for the first time_(0)
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I generally liked the story and as far as the spelling and grammar errors are concerned, they didn't interfere with my understanding and enjoyment of the story. However, I thought it was rather bizarre that a supposedly 18 y/o guy and his 16 y/o sister had not ever even kissed anyone before and now they suddenly decide to have sex with each other. WTF? That's a bit beyond belief. |
| 2013-08-07 12:55:07 |
My Daughters Best Friend Pt 1
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Kinda hard to give a positive rating for a story when there's evidence that it was plagiarized. |
| 2013-08-26 13:36:10 |
My Journey to Becoming a Slut - Part 1
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I really get turned on by stories that portray young people experiencing sex for their first time. And this story was particularly good as well as being very hot. |
| 2014-08-29 14:40:21 |
The Shed Club (part 6)
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That was a terrific wrap up of this series. It was well written AND it was definitely strokeworthy enough to make me cum. |