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Comments from klaxx
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-05-09 16:09:43 | The Siblings: Chapter 3, Patty | Beautiful yet again, but isn't 14 a bit young for being such an experienced seductress - especially since Alex doesn't have much experience? |
| 2011-05-09 16:30:52 | My Daughter Alison and her best friend Sarah's Treat | Not Young, as they need to be 14 or under for that category. Not real Incest either, but I'll let that one go. Story was OK until they started having the threesome. Went to hell when Dave showed up. Will NOT be reading further. |
| 2011-05-09 17:23:58 | The Siblings: chapter 4, The First Time | Fabulous once again! Romantic bro-sis stories are my favorite genre. Lovin' it! Wonder where they got the water heater for a two-hour-long shower, though. |
| 2011-05-09 17:46:25 | Pretty good. Could use more character development, though, and a slower pace. And a space between paragraphs. And Young means 14 or younger. | |
| 2011-05-09 18:06:20 | Love And Lust: Sibling Peace (first draft)_(1) | Loved the romance. Well worth the read. Need to work on that formatting, though. |