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Comments from klaxx
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2010-09-30 01:36:58 | Too good to be true pt2: My best friend Julie | I'm with Nonny0912, both about the writing and about the ending. |
| 2010-09-30 01:58:29 | Okay, this once-great story is deteriorating into a circus act. Bye. | |
| 2010-10-27 03:35:35 | LOL? The story sucks. At least I have the balls to post my name, anonymous coward. | |
| 2011-01-09 00:24:48 | This story has great potential. I usually steer clear of dark, violent stories, but this one seems to have drawn me in. Yes, there were misspellings and typos aplenty, but, IMO, the story was strong enough to withstand those flaws. The plot seems well constructed, if a bit predictable; the erotic scenes are very good as well. I look forward to reading the next chapter(s)! Your work would be greatly improved by a spell checker, but even more greatly helped by proofreading - perhaps by a friend if you can't do it yourself. Just sayin'.... |
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| 2011-01-09 16:16:49 | The ride_(0) | Very nice story. I wonder, though, that if you can't continue it without making it entirely fiction, does this mean that it was a one-off? If so, too bad. |