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Comments from klaxx
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2011-01-28 15:03:04 | Blind sweetness | French names, sci-fi/fantasy theme, and the use of onii-sama? Gotta be Anime or Manga! Is this a video-to-print adaptation? If so, great job! |
| 2011-01-28 19:01:04 | You were the good kid, huh? Nice story, but not too believable. By the way, what happened to the pizza? |
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| 2011-01-30 18:36:26 | Warming her up - Ch 1 | Nice beginning, but - bummer - no sex. Spelling and proofreading could use work. I await the next part to see how things are going to go. Very interesting so far. |
| 2011-01-30 18:50:09 | The Most Dangerous Thing pt. 2 | THAT was unbelievably hot. Proper paragraphing and paragraph spacing would improve things tremendously. But, whatever. Just write more! |
| 2011-02-09 23:03:31 | You've got a great plot going, but don't seem to want to put much effort into cleaning it up. Also, I dunno why some people like garbage mouth when having sex. Making love whilst spewing profanity seems like a clash, but that's just me I guess. Anyway, it killed any romantic mood, IMO. |