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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-11-28 10:32:26 | My Neighbor's Incest Part XII | j.p.31 Click on my user name and you'll get the list. Or look under the long list of stories. |
| 2009-12-02 13:28:52 | My Neighbor's Incest Part XV | It is so great to see your feedback. Thank You. Let me ask those of you who have followed this a question, do you think this story would have been better in the third person? If I knew it was going to grow so far, I would have done it that way. Simply, because it's much easier to write third person. Has first person added to the story? I love the Winn-Dixie character Jessy Jay. She is an actual girl who I met in Winn-Dixie. No, I am not the guy in that story. As much as I love her and the story, I promised myself I'd finish this one up first. I have to go away for what could end up being forever in the world of sites like this. That will be in four or five weeks, I think. So, I cannot promise anything about that story other than I'd like to. I am sorry if I end up not because it was wrong to start and leave hanging. |
| 2009-12-02 13:48:15 | Finding Krissy - The Great Escape - Chapter 1 | Hey, I just posted a reply to your earlier post. Some good news from the admin. I don't have time to read this right now, but I'll come back to it. Looks like some format issue. If you have any question don't hesitate to ask. PM me if you need to. |
| 2009-12-02 16:02:30 | My Neighbor's Incest Part XV | 2009-12-02 14:53:37 No she wasn't suppose to fuck him!!! I know, I hated that too. Almost couldn't bring myself to it. But, it was a necessary evil in the life of this troubled girl. I love all the positive comments and even the ones not positive when they help. What sucks is that many people just scroll down and click the negative button without regard for anything except their selfish motives. Most will not know what I mean, but those who do, shame on you. Hey, any thoughts on the first person third person question? I'm looking for help. I'm not a writer so I need your help. |
| 2009-12-03 12:55:33 | My Neighbor's Incest Part XV | It is so great to see your feedback. Thank You. Yes there will be more chapters, but will be wrapping up in the next few. Let me ask those of you who have followed this a question, do you think this story would have been better in the third person? If I knew it was going to grow so far, I would have used third person. Simply, because it's much easier to write third person. Has first person added to the story? I know I've gotten some answers to this, but interest in other's thoughts. |