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Comments from BiStander
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-12-03 18:20:50 | My Neighbor's Incest Part XV | "U as the Investigative Counsellor working to make sense of this Dysfunctional Jungle." Yes, my exact thinking when I asked the question. "Including behavioural twists and dependencies. I would like to think this would reflect some research of the REAL experiences of adult survivors of such abuse/mis-socialisation." You are on to something here and although I don't think this is the platform for something as profound as you propose, I hope the ending doesn't just mark the close of this story. The research was lived more than studied. Thank you for your comments. They were beyond my expectations. |
| 2009-12-03 23:25:36 | My Neighbor's Incest Part XV | "i dont like this chapter. too much confliction. the idea of cindy bringing peace to joe's life for a moment was better." Thanks for your honest opinion. I actually agree. I shed a few tears writing it, but it was needed. I hope it helps me get to the end with the impact I was hoping for. It would have been a great love story written without the conflict. Maybe the next one will be. Thanks for taking the time to comment. These help me. |
| 2009-12-04 02:06:28 | My Neighbor's Incest Part XV | anon No he didn't. She gave him a bj on two occasions but not sex. |
| 2009-12-05 12:02:45 | My Neighbor's Incest Part XV | Trust me, I don't let these comments go to my head, but they do push me on. Everything I have learned about writing has been done right here during these stories. I take your comments to motivate me, and I search grammar and writing sites for fee help. One day when I get a book published, there will have to be an acknowledgement to the named and unnamed readers on XNXX. I'll also have to give a big flip of the bird to those unnamed teachers who humiliated that little boy with a learning disability and drove him away from anything related to literature for decades. |
| 2009-12-07 23:35:33 | My Neighbor's Incest Part XV | To the last two comments, Thank you for your honesty. I understand your feelings, but stay with it because there is much more going on than what is obvious. For instance, where does Joe get off being jealous after what he just did and has done in the past? Also, Jeremy is only a "log" in Joe's mind, plus there are things we don't know yet. I'll post the next chapter soon, but be warned, it sucks. Only one short sex act. To really get this story it might need to be read without gaps between chapters and for that I am sorry. I hope when it finishes everyone who has been encouraging will say, "Oh, that's what it was all about." |