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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-01-31 21:45:33 | Potential Part 14 | To recap: Beware, I split the chapter 15 into two short chapter, so what I said earlier about Ms. Stlye doesn't happen until 16. It was that or put out a really long not so great chapter. I'm glad I did it. The stuff I'm working on now can't be rushed. 16 will also leave Math cursing me. :-) 15 is on wolfpub and Nifty and it's in the que here. |
| 2017-02-04 17:22:31 | My Neighbor's Incest Part XII | Thanks for the insight, anonymous, I'll consider rewriting it because you understand exactly how every person in the world reacts. But do read on because Joe might feel different after the fact. |
| 2017-02-04 17:30:58 | My Neighbor's Incest Part XIX The End | Anonymous reader: 2017-01-29 09:55:36 "All those great chapters, then leave it hanging at the end. Ruined the whole story." Thank you for commenting. I can't look now, but you can go on the forum and find the thread about this story and it will explain why the ending had to be what it was, disappointing in many people's eyes. |
| 2017-03-15 14:18:45 | Potential Part 16 | I took a couple of days off after finishing this chapter, then I decided to finish dictating all the pages I had written by hand. I should have done that to start with and I would have saved tons of time looking for stuff when I needed it. Turned out to be 400 legal pages. Then I id'ed all the important scenes that I still need and the ones that already happened. Now I'm doing a bit of planning, something I'm not good at. I'm telling you this so you'll know I'm working but chapter 17 is still a couple of weeks out. Thank you for your patience. |
| 2017-03-13 02:35:19 | My Neighbor's Incest Part XIX The End | CloudSenpai, thanks, great comments. Nobody liked what Susan did with Jeremy, but, besides being screwed up in the head from all the dysfunction around her, she was jealous and upset about Jasmine and Joe. Been years since I wrote that so I actually can't remember the exact details about that situation, but when I finish rewriting it for wolfpub and nifty, maybe I'll make a change there. :-) |