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Comments from Ed Itor
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-05-18 18:33:32 | Boy in the grass 58 | Also considering what had happened to others, in Jazz's view maybe Tali could have died. Remember Tali is her twin and might not be as adroit as Jazz in charming people or even might rub some the wrong way. A Good chapter and it allowed us a view into the 4 Mousketeers personalities and how & why they have become an extended part of this family. It also lets us know a bit about their family values too. The interesting part of how this raid works out now begins and what happens to the children, the family, their friends and the authorities starts. As for The Wedding, that would be The Happy Ending that Max deserves to have this finish on. |
| 2017-05-22 19:27:43 | The Hunters become the hunted part 3 | Wolf knight left this site over 2 yrs ago, along with a lot of writers, after the writers' purge by admin. |
| 2017-06-30 04:45:56 | Then There Was Magic (complete) | This is a good story, something to while away the tedious days. Yes there are spelling & grammatical errors but it is entertaining. I agree that more could have been told about his magical history and his adventures but it was a good read, I just wish you Yanks would realise that it is dragged (pulled along against one's will) and not drugged (given drugs against ones will). |