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Comments from Ed Itor
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-05-04 19:42:02 | Boy in the grass 52 | You missed an opportunity to use Evan's falling to his knees and shaking to frighten Thomas. You could have had Jenna ask that if Evan couldn't control himself and behave that maybe he needed more time with the convict. This would also allow the bonding with Thomas that you want. Right now the girls are treating the guys too softly for slaves that would be frightened of them for daddy dearest. |
| 2012-09-03 19:13:05 | Modern Mage - Chapter 14 | Good spacing between the next action cycle and the last. dathel0101, it is similar to what they do on Dr. Who when getting you ready for the next adventure cycle by explaining the whatnots of the story. |
| 2012-09-03 19:13:07 | Modern Mage - Chapter 14 | Good spacing between the next action cycle and the last. dathel0101, it is similar to what they do on Dr. Who when getting you ready for the next adventure cycle by explaining the whatnots of the story. |
| 2012-09-03 19:13:07 | Modern Mage - Chapter 14 | Good spacing between the next action cycle and the last. dathel0101, it is similar to what they do on Dr. Who when getting you ready for the next adventure cycle by explaining the whatnots of the story. |
| 2012-09-26 20:57:06 | Me and my sisters friends | What's your age boy, I say what's your age? |