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Comments from WantSumCandyLittleGirl
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-09-11 15:27:27 | Pleasure Cruise, Part 1 | Not bad, not bad at all. Good plot, great story line and transitions throughout the story. I only have one question: Have you thought about adding some spacing between the paragraphs? That would make the flow go a little better - make it easier to read. |
| 2010-09-15 09:46:23 | My Roommate Judy | Well, the story plot was good but the writing wasn't. Poor grammar, poor spelling, and horrible punctuation. By the way, when you refer to a women's pajamas - it's spelled nightie, not knighty. Did you actually pass English in high school? Anyway, you need to really work on the writing. Like I said, the plot and story line are good - it's all in the mechanics. Sorry, but have to tell it like I read it. |
| 2010-09-23 09:24:59 | Daddy's Little Minx: Maria | Good story, well written and detailed. I would have enjoyed it even more if there had been a little lead-in to the overall story and more detail to the actual fucking. Thanks - look forward to more from you in the future. |
| 2010-09-23 09:40:17 | Me and Julies wet morning | What a joke - horrific spelling, even worse grammar as obviously english is not your first language. If it is, go back to school and learn it all over again. Next, the entire plot is ludicrous, unfeasible, and not realistic. If you want to write erotic stories - learn how. This was simply NOT erotic in any way shape or form. |
| 2010-09-23 09:44:07 | my sis's bad day | Pretty good story - but if it's not yours, who's is it? Why didn't you cite the original author? Even though you say it's not yours, if you don't cite the author, people are going to believe this is your work - which is called plagarism. BTW, that's a fancy word for lying. |