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Comments from WantSumCandyLittleGirl
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-02-07 10:46:37 | She Really Wanted It | The only thing that would have made that story better would have been if you pushed your cock into her mouth while she was getting fucked by Rhett. Then, as she is cumming from the dog cock up her pussy, you could be filling her throat with your cock and emptying your balls into her mouth. All in all, a good read, but you need to work on the grammar some, as well as develop the sex details more. |
| 2011-02-07 12:40:40 | Life 1 | Well, it's obvious to the most casual observer that either English is not your native language or you flunked grammar, spelling, and punctuation miserably. Come back when you learn how to use all three, as well as learn how to write a story with a plausible line. |
| 2011-02-07 12:42:30 | Life 5 | Certainly hope this is the last chapter in the series. Again, your english skills suck worse than the story. |
| 2011-02-10 12:06:19 | Hard Day's Night | AnalSlave - excellent writing, good story. Thanks for the hot scenes and action. Look forward to reading more from you. klaxx - isn't the purpose of having a beautiful, young, innocent girl skewered on the end of your cock soley to have her spewing obscenities? Gosh, go figure, that's what I always thought they should do. |
| 2011-02-10 12:12:12 | Warming her up - Ch 1 | Initial impressions leave me desiring more, but the jury is still out on overall grade. Looking forward to the next chapter. |