| 2011-11-26 10:02:31 |
The Wetter The Better_(0)
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Horrible - writing skills of a 12 yr old. Poor grammar, story line non-existent. What, you get your rocks off to this shit? |
| 2011-11-26 10:03:13 |
The Wetter The Better_(1)
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Piece of shit writing. |
| 2012-01-15 01:18:17 |
Tiny Cousin Amanda first time,
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What the hell was that supposed to be - a story? Sorry, go back and finish middle school and then high school. Maybe one day you'll learn how to actually write a cohesive sentence. |
| 2012-01-15 01:31:53 |
A surprise
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A bit on the strange side, but not too badly written. Work on the paragraph spacing and looking forward to the next chapter. |
| 2012-01-15 01:32:10 |
A surprise
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A bit on the strange side, but not too badly written. Work on the paragraph spacing and looking forward to the next chapter. |