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Comments from WantSumCandyLittleGirl
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-05-01 22:57:06 | Generational Sluts | Ok, if Macie was 16 when she got knocked up and Jessie is 4, how the fuck is Macie only 18? Even the F student in 2nd grade knows 16 + 4 = 20. |
| 2012-05-01 22:59:41 | n love with my 5 pedifiles part 2 | You know, some, as you call them, speeling and grammer mistakes are one thing - but a whole fucking story of them? Please, grow the fuck up and learn to spell. Then learn grammar. Oh - yeah, that's right, your story sucked shit from the asshole of a dead turtle. |
| 2012-07-20 00:04:45 | Me and my horses part 1 | Seriously sad story. Not the story in and of itself, but the telling of the story. No details, no sensuality - ok, yeah, it is horse fucking, but you get the idea. Sorry - had to rate it Negative. |
| 2012-08-28 00:27:44 | Madison loves her daddy's cream | Kadri - good start to what may end up being a good series. Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Remember, proofread for the little things. |
| 2012-08-28 00:29:32 | Daughter Fucks Dad, He thinks it's actually daughter's friend! | Spelling, grammar, punctuation, and general formatting. Sorry - even the overall plot and story were bad. Get some help writing else don't quit your day job. |