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Comments from WantSumCandyLittleGirl
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-02-16 21:08:10 | Returning Chapter 01 | Dang net logged me out. Last comment was mine. I also agree with Wolf_Knight - watch the writing and make sure to use the correct word. WSCLG |
| 2013-02-16 21:44:42 | Returning Chapter 02 | Correct words and grammar and punctuation. |
| 2013-04-22 00:51:26 | Buddy & daughter | Horrid writing - simply horrid. Learn to create sentences, use proper grammar and punctuation, include separate paragraphs. |
| 2013-07-11 17:36:29 | From grade school graduation to high school. | Not a lot of detail, but not a bad story. Keep trying. |
| 2013-10-01 19:41:11 | Fantasy Fulfilled_(2) | Excellent story. Next time - separate the paragraphs. Makes it easier to read. |