| 2013-10-05 12:29:15 |
His Wife finds out - Now she my Whore
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The storyline was good but the writing was shit. |
| 2013-10-07 06:14:38 |
Brother / Sister Incest Porno - Part 1
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Shit writing from a shit author. Learn to write, by that I mean use correct spelling, proper grammar, sentence and paragraph structure, and how to set a story. No lead in, no plot - not even the sex was worth a damn. |
| 2013-10-16 18:16:52 |
Dady's and mommy's angel
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Where did you learn to write or are you still in school and therefore illegally here? The writing, the plot, the spelling, the grammar, and the sentence structure are so bad I cann |
| 2013-10-16 18:18:56 |
Dady's and mommy's angel
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Where did you learn to write or are you still in school and therefore illegally here? The writing, the plot, the spelling, the grammar, and the sentence structure are so bad I cannot give you a low enough rating. Learn to write, learn how dialogue is written, learn about transitions and such. Then, get a proofreader and try again. Otherwise, quit wasting our time on this drivel. |
| 2013-10-16 18:27:42 |
The present
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Learn how to separate paragraphs, spell, and write. For instance is it Brandon or Bandon? |