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Comments from Prurient Purveyer
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| 2012-04-09 18:36:06 | Scott held his younger sister’s hand as he walked her to school. They had been walking to school for years and had always held hands. Now he was thirteen and she was eleven and in the first year of Intermediate he had asked her if she still wanted him to hold her hand but instead of the sensible answer a boy might give, like yes or no she got upset and looked at him as though he had asked something terrible. Then when he had said sorry she had gone all mushy on him and said she was sorry too. OK Mister 45 Years Of Reading experience Anonymous Poster, that is the first paragraph; which sentence can't you understand? |
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| 2012-04-09 18:39:15 | Note, the question mark where the apostrophe should be in "sister s" is a product of the XNXX Site and I have no idea why it happens. | |
| 2012-04-09 23:04:54 | Well at least you got to the middle. I've written over sixty stories on this site (39 which I pulled plus 27 on show) and I have never had anyone say he found one of my stories confusing. It does require some concentration and the viewpoint changes so that at times its from hers and at others from his but its hardly Virginia Woolf like in it's complexity. |
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| 2012-04-10 02:40:40 | The story works but you have to understand its being written from both Janet and Scott's perspective. She asks him what he thinks of these girls because she wants to be sure he doesn't want to ask them out because she wants him herself. The How we kissed line? She wants him to say it again, she's a girl so she wants to hear him say iyt again. And she isn't turned on by unwashed hands and stinky feet. How on earth did you figure that? She chastises him for not washing his hands or flushing the toilet and she is repelled by the smell of his feet but is tactful in how she treats him changing from a comment on his feet to a suggestion he eat the savories before they get cold. Its a new role for her in her relationship with him. Did you not see that. Try reading it properly and remember its from multiple view points, if you read it all the way through the Mom bit will become clear. |
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| 2012-04-13 03:38:13 | PERFORMANCE REVIEW | Ohh Sweetie! You are just the Queen of Lesbian seduction you are. Great story and a big fat positive from me. PP |