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Date Story title Comment
2012-06-02 17:30:31 Glad you liked it guys.

To Anonymous reader, there has to be enough religious sounding things in it for her to be a good girl doing the "Lord's" bidding rather than just being an easy lay for dad.

And Ghostrider, thanks, glad you got it. This is at most a mild parody on some religious groups but t is just meant as a light hearted read.
2012-06-15 00:26:06 Hinata's love for Naruto pt. 1 Well this is top quality writing

Late afternoon in the village hidden in the leaf, Konoha's Hokage need's our two hero's for an important mission.

Heroes is a plural, not a possessive , how is the village hidden in one leaf and what is a "Hokage'

And thanks for the four fucking negatives on my story- favor returned.
2012-06-15 00:35:51 I put a vote on this to offset a negative put on by another writer.
2012-06-15 02:16:21 Its called Worshipping Daddy's Penis. You'd have to think incest would be something of a prerequisite for that wouldn't you?
2012-06-15 02:21:59 Hinata's love for Naruto pt. 1 English really is a challenge for you ,isn't it dear. You persist in writing plurals as possessives.

You didn't put one negative on my story; you voted logged in and that is worth four votes.

Your own writing is quite simply mediocre. I have no interest in the world to which you refer and absolutely no chance of finding out about it by trying to wade through your offering.
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