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Comments from Don'sdick
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-07-14 02:42:41 | My Sister Terri | Great story line! Why not do more with it? |
| 2015-07-14 02:55:34 | Nikki and her Brother | Very good read. Got me hard immediately... but isn't that what this site is for? I do believe, even as old as I am, I'd like to spend some time with Nikki.... telling stories, of course. |
| 2015-07-14 19:25:35 | Having Jamie | Don'sdick is hard, hand pumping, wishing this one was longer.... the story AND my dick. :-) Please write more... |
| 2015-07-14 19:52:14 | Fucking MIke the sexy farm hand! | I gave you a positive rating, pinupbaby. But I agree with the two previous comments. A story with no spaces, or no paragraphing is called a 'white wall'. It IS harder to read, especially if a reader is impatient... which I am not. I, personally, like to use quotation marks when people are 'speaking', too. This story has really good potential because my old dick was getting hard by the time I was half way thru it... but that's what these stories are for, right? Please keep writing and have a friend, brother, fuck buddy or someone to read and help you adjust on the format. Content is great.... made me want to be your hired hand. |
| 2015-07-14 19:59:47 | Fucking To The Beat On The Dance Floor | 38Ds? I like that for sure! Again, fine story line, good descriptive areas, but it's a 'white wall'... no spaces or paragraphs. If I hadn't already jacked off to the 'farm hand' story, this one would have done it for me. Please keep writing, you have great potential. Better formatting will be better ratings (but I voted 'positive, anyway) |