| 2011-01-28 23:02:09 |
Family Vacation 3
|
These stories were so great with them getting painted up winning the contest and the picture was so hot I think it would have also been pretty cool to see what the brother looked like all painted up it would have been cool to see A pic of him also. |
| 2011-01-29 23:16:13 |
Jenni and Kati Caught part 3
|
This stry was so fucking hot it had me horny just reading it I could not believe this was the hottest stry of this kind I have read can't wait to read more plz continue. |
| 2011-01-30 17:35:24 |
Chemistry_(0)
|
I sort of liked this story because of the concept but due to the fact of the problems in the grammar in which I do at times to so don't feel bad and also the fact that you completely rushed this and all of your other stories if not for those things these would be great stories just work on those and you'll have this story telling down in no time. |
| 2011-02-09 02:55:49 |
Tiffany's Adventure's (Ch 1)
|
This story was so fucking great & hot it got me hard to the point of having to take care of myself hope and can't wait to see more of this series and maybe even something after this you are A very damn good writer your one who can really catch A readers attention rght away I am one who especially likes these types of stories it got my attention in the very beginning so I hope you write more in this series and possibly more and for me being someone also from Co. I thnk you have A very great talent for this. |
| 2011-02-15 03:26:33 |
My auntie's Party
|
Great story it gave me A good boner reading it I agree along the lines of it being kind of rushed especially the sex U seem to have A very gifted talent that not everyone has to be able to write one of these stories and get people really interested keep up the good wrk and plz write more abt these 2. |