| 2011-01-02 23:47:33 |
love between siblings (rewritten)
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With it being rewritten this story was better than the first one you could understand what was going on with the story and the love between the two the passion that they share this one also had me going the whole time during reading it I think you really have the knack for this kind of story writing and if you have to revamp them sometimes so what it just makes them even better. |
| 2011-01-02 23:54:29 |
love between siblings 2
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The passion these two share is absolutely great it shows how there are some siblings out there who can get along just great to wind up in A relationship like this to where others are alway at each others throats it makes me wish I had one of those siblings that is how good this story was. |
| 2011-01-02 23:57:22 |
love between siblings: part 2 (rewritten)
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The passion and love they share great story |
| 2011-01-03 00:04:47 |
love between siblings: part 3
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All of this series has been great you really showed how A Bro/Sis can have A very passionate and loving relationship and really come to love one another in ways they never knew they could love each other I think him standing up to his parents was the right thing to do because once you get into A relationship like that as he told her he would never leave her and if he went off to yale or harvard she would be left there and who knows what would happen at least with him there and with her whether in secret or out he can give her the love that is true to their relationship. |
| 2011-01-03 00:25:29 |
My Darling Medusa
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great story can't wait to read more |