| 2010-12-20 01:21:58 |
The Vampire Chronicles: Part I
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This was A great story can't wait to read more. |
| 2010-12-22 14:21:44 |
What is love?
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For this being fiction it sure seemed like A true one to me the whole time reading it you put so much great detail into this that while reading this story U just can't hlp but drift off into ur imagination and put urslf in the position of one of these 2 boys and it just makes U horny trying to imagine all this going on especially if it is U tht it is happening 2 I hope 2 see more storys abt these 2 especially since U make thm seem so real. |
| 2010-12-30 02:44:40 |
A Schoolboy's Secrets - Day One
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This was 1 pretty damn good reading this story got my imagination running @ full speed putting mental images of the detailed parts of the story of course therre were A few thngs tht could have used A lil bit more description to thm but what can U say all writers make simple errors like tht noone is A completely prfct writer other thn tht this stry was 1 pretty damn good one it made me horny just reading it can't wait to read more abt thes two new lovers. |
| 2010-12-31 05:22:10 |
Curious Josh (Edited) Part 1
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Great story loved the realism and all the perfect details to describe who,what,where, and why their friendship being as short as it was led to their actions this story had me on the edge of exploding just from reading it can't wait to read more about these 2's relationship to see wht cums of it. |
| 2010-12-31 13:45:45 |
Lions of Scarborough
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good story but it went A little to fast for me couldn't really get the grip on it you told it so fast. |