| 2010-12-16 12:56:07 |
My Prince, Part 3
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These stories were great can't wait to se if more is to come and if so what is to come out in those stories. |
| 2010-12-16 13:05:47 |
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This story had me interested from the title then reading it made me more interested but then you get to the end and are just left in suspense as to who caught them whether it was construction worker, another boy around same age who maybe followed them and was waiting for the right time to barge in or even knew about theor clubhouse and decided to barge in on them or maybe even it is Mark who busts them noone knows I'm sure alot of people are in suspense over it please write more continue the story for @ least one more chapter. |
| 2010-12-16 13:11:33 |
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This is A really great story I was so aware of what both of these guys went through and i really still am so this story was just great to be able to hear how they did this I did have someone i crushed on @ that age but I was 2 afraid to do anything because of some experiences I had please write on continue don't stop here. |
| 2010-12-17 00:34:39 |
Vampiric Love Chpt. 3
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I think that it could use some more sex between the two lovers and A little bit more detail other than that these stories were really pretty good and considering I like anything to do with vampires these stories really peaked my interest I think it would be cool if you were to continue the series. |
| 2010-12-17 13:36:11 |
Vampire Ethan's Stories 1
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This was great it had me in suspense through reading the whole thing I am looking forward to what is coming up in the next installments of this series. |