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Comments from Preverted1
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-11-12 19:39:09 | Little Sister's Dilemma - Part III | JJ, I've had a lot of "different" requests, but that was the one that got a good chuckle from me, and one that'll I'll add to my "All-time favorites" list . . . ! Thank you for that! PS. I have more stories in the works . . . as if you could get rid of me that easily! |
| 2011-11-21 03:38:54 | What happens under the covers...stays under the covers... | I have to agree that, for someone claiming to be a published writer, the constructional errors stand out like a sore thumb. Most notable is the change of tense between paragraphs in Chapter 1. That said, it's a decent storyline, and the descriptive narrations definitely get the message across. I can only assume that you'd need a proofreader in what seems like a new venue for you, the realms of erotica. |
| 2011-11-21 03:39:08 | What happens under the covers...stays under the covers... | I have to agree that, for someone claiming to be a published writer, the constructional errors stand out like a sore thumb. Most notable is the change of tense between paragraphs in Chapter 1. That said, it's a decent storyline, and the descriptive narrations definitely get the message across. I can only assume that you'd need a proofreader in what seems like a new venue for you, the realms of erotica. |
| 2011-11-27 02:43:11 | Little Sister's Dilemma | Anonymous on 2011-11-27 02:19:34 If you can show me the original author's story as proof of your statement, I'll have the whole series taken down. However, a quick search does not bring up that UserID, and I've never heard of it before. If you're going to accuse someone of plagiarism, be prepared to prove your allegation! |
| 2011-11-28 01:58:12 | Good presentation of an excellent storyline. I enjoyed the concepts presented. |