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Comments from Preverted1
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-12-05 23:02:14 | A Family Cruise 1 | I won't bother metioning that the formatting and spelling / construction could use some detailing. It's an interesting tale, and reminds me of another series written at the beginning of 2011 about a family that cruises the Caribbean in their sailboat. It, too, becomes a family affair that expands into a like-minded society. Still have to go through the rest of your chapters, which should keep me busy for a few days . . . well, it'll keep my hand in! |
| 2012-02-09 04:32:52 | HARD at work_(1) | Fj, that "hanging ending" is nasty! You just KNOW we're all going to be looking for "the rest of the story", don'tcha? |
| 2012-07-04 17:10:24 | Little Sister's Dilemma | What the fuck is this, a fucking bulletin board? It's the fucking bullshit like that, that convinced me to quit posting on this site. Too bad, really, because there's some good writers here, |