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Comments from Mark Twayn
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-11-19 08:35:28 | CAW #9 - A Hanukkah Gift | Fabulous writing and a sensitively worded story. I hope to see a lot more of your work. One suggestion if I may. The title of a story is the headline to grab readers' attention and your title would have been incomprehensible to 99%. |