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Date Story title Comment
2010-04-30 18:47:19 The too small airline seats "I can’t help myself. Your beauty puts unreasonable demands on my mind"

Thanks man. What a great line to chat up a chick with. I'll try it. Can't see how any woman could resist a line like. And just about all you others
2010-05-05 18:49:33 A Very Difficult Daughter Hi

There's a sequel now posted to this story - A Very Difficult Daughter - Chap 2 "It's your body Sally" if you are interested

Easiest way to find it is to click my name (i.e.the author's) at the top of the page.

Cheers
MT
2010-05-18 19:43:17 A Brother's Revenge_(0) From Mark, the author to creamydick who wrote the comments below

Thanks for your efforts, but maybe you're off-target sometimes.

I have read all ejls stories and admire her a lot. And she thinks I'm a pretty good writer also. Like you she thinks this particular story isn't great. And I agree. I wrote this in a few hours as a satire on what sometimes works on this site. And it has.

Try another site?
I have 3 stories read over 200,000 times here plus quite a few others which have been pretty well read. So, some readers, including some discerning ones seem to find my scratchings OK.

Practice?
I suggest you try "A Very Difficult Daughter" and see if you still think the same.

Advice for you.
You're more than entitled to dislike and criticize any story. But perhaps you should read a bit more before descending into pompous and ignorant attacks on the author.
2010-05-20 21:35:20 A Very Difficult Daughter There is a chapter 2 now up on site. "A Very Difficult Daughter Chap 2 "It's Your Body Sally"

If you enjoyed this you might like to read that as well. Easiest way to find it is it click mt name (i.e. the author) at the top of the page,

Good reading

Mark Twayn
2010-06-05 05:32:17 A Very Difficult Daughter Author's response to the comment below; "Not A Skier?"

I enjoy skiing but claim no great expertise, but the language is a country difference I suspect.

Where I come from, which isn't the UK, a ski field comprises many slopes and/or trails. What you get access to when you buy a ski pass.
Ski pants? Any red blooded male where I come from would set fire to his own hair before calling his ski trousers, ski pants.

Hope that helps and I'm glad you enjoyed the story. And thanks for taking the trouble to write a comment.

Cheers
MT
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