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Comments from Mark Twayn
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-10-23 18:24:58 | My sister, the Bitch (was taken down i found it) | Thanks for putting this one up again. The first half was a classic, great sex, the thrill of incest and great writing. The second half when too many characters came in became muddled and the writer seemed to be worrying more about how many variations he could bring in than anything else. It lost its steam. |
| 2009-10-23 23:43:37 | A Very Difficult Daughter | Yes, sorry about all the "lovelys" especially in the last third. I did proof read read it a few times but never picked it up. It was embarrassing when someone else did so 130,000 readers ago. I do have a bit of a vocab and use a thesaurus. Canadian? No I'm not a lumberjack or a Mountie and don't like maple syrup. Cheers MT |
| 2009-10-26 01:59:37 | A Very Difficult Daughter | Nope. Not an upper class snob, and don't have cockney slang. Don't like fish and chips. MT |
| 2009-11-02 12:52:03 | A Very Difficult Daughter | Hi I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I know a lot of people come to this site for the straight sex. Nothing wrong with that, it's healthy. I guess I like to write stories with a build up - the thrill of the chase, seeing how the characters develop, how the seduction works out. As they used to say in an old airline ad, getting there is half the fun. Cheers MT |
| 2009-11-04 17:00:01 | THE CASTING COUCH_(1) | Hi re the comment below I understand what you mean about happy endings and usually I do write them. I like them and one of the things which has surprised me about the site is that a lot of readers like them too. In this one with Anton being in the porn business, getting together long term with Kristina didn't seem to fit. But at least they bonked for 10 years. Cheers MT |