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Comments from Mark Twayn
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-04-08 16:07:04 | Punk Slut Sis | From a quote further down " YOUR FORMATTING WAS GOOD ON THE FIRST TRY! " First try? I think not. This is Emberto by another name and a new country writing this. Hey, big E, resurrect Anal Threesome. It was a classic. |
| 2010-04-12 18:35:39 | "sirens story" part 1: Turning me out! | Try keeping paragraphs to to five lines max. Computer screens are far harder to read than books and your writing, with its long paragraphs just comes across as a wall of words and very difficult to read. |
| 2010-04-15 19:46:37 | Roommates: Ch1 - Cock & Pussy Tease | The story was pretty good. But it was really tough to read. Try having paragraphs no more than five lines long and please, forget the bold type. |
| 2010-04-24 00:58:21 | A Very Difficult Daughter | I'm about 95% of the way through. Then proof reading and fine tuning which may take a couple of weeks - I hate proof reading. Thanks for your interest MT |
| 2010-04-29 21:09:11 | A Brother's Revenge_(0) | Author's comment I freely admit that it was inspired, to a certain extent, by My Sister The Bitch, which I think is one of the classics of its type. But, there's a lot of differences as well and hopefully some originality. To little attention to the other girls. Sure but reading the same thing four times over can get a bit repetitive and boring. And the same for writing. Not credible. Spot on. But 99.99% of the stories on this site aren't really credible, particularly the ones which claim to be true. But thanks so much for taking the time to read and the effort to comment Cheers Mark |