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Comments from 1MTNMN45
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-08-21 08:57:50 | Mom Caught Me pt. 4 | Not bad. I recognize the writing style. You have also done a nice job of separating the paragraphs and the different speaking lines. Makes for a very readable story. I can relate to the boys position, my son was very hesitant to even touch the girls before my wife came up with a plan to fix that. Good story with good cohesion and nice flow. 8/10 Mike |
| 2015-08-29 13:44:35 | Who just fucked me? | Nice story. Good structure to your paragraphs and good continuity with the story progression. Do an extra re-read before posting next time. There are a few errors with the spelling, but I aware of this in that many of my stories are riddled with them. And don't worry about the negative vote from TOUCANPLAY. She is just some disgruntled old hag who votes negative for every last story. I think she gets off on it which is pretty sad. Check around and you will not find a single positive vote from her anywhere. Yet she does not have the stones to write a story of her own. Keep up the good work. I give this story 9.8 out of 10. :) Mike |
| 2015-08-29 13:40:23 | Who just fucked me? | See that. I can't even make a post without an error! |
| 2015-08-29 13:39:34 | Who just fucked me? | Nice story. Good structure to your paragraphs and good continuity with the story progression. Do an extra re-read before posting next time. There are a few errors with the spelling, but I aware of this in that many of my stories are riddled with them. And don't worry about the negative vote from TOUCANPLAY. She is just some disgruntled old hag who votes negative for every last story. I think she gets off on it which is pretty sad. Check around and you will not find a single positive vote from her anywhere. Yet she does not have the stones to write a story of her own. Keep up the good work. I give this story 9.8 out of 10. :) Mike |
| 2015-08-29 13:51:34 | Who just fucked me? | Sorry for the double post. Had a little technical glitch. Just added you to my favorites list. Good job! |