| 2013-02-21 10:12:21 |
Bobby's new power
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A strange way to control people but unique. What happens while wearing clothes? Please continue. I want to read more, |
| 2013-02-22 14:19:17 |
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very good read. Will there be a part two? |
| 2013-03-22 21:32:36 |
My Photogenic Mom Chapter 1
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Had to give it a negative rating. Breaks in the story makes it easier to read, |
| 2013-03-22 21:34:46 |
My Photogenic Mom Chapter 4_(1)
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Are you writing this or copying and posting? Please use breaks between paragraphs. Make it easier for us to read and rate. |
| 2013-03-30 07:28:11 |
My Whole Family Needed Me_(0)
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Very good but a little more spacing to ease the reading. I hope the next part is as good as the first. |