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Comments from goiko
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-01-28 21:07:03 | Maid to Serve_(0) | I hope there is more coming. This was well written and thought out. Please add to her adventures. |
| 2014-12-16 16:26:59 | DESTINY IN A WORLD OF HEROES.Ch 2 | Your story is very good so far but the only downside I see is your editing. Not so many explanations as what song is being sung or how costume looks. Also better spell checks and capitalization. The story and overall plot is great just a few problems to be corrected. |
| 2014-09-24 22:04:13 | My Photogenic Mom (Corrected | Darkroom? What happened to digital ? |
| 2014-02-17 13:24:52 | Boy in the grass 1 | This is great so far. Excellent beginning!!!! |
| 2014-12-31 16:59:44 | The Divorcee Blues: part 1_(1) | Different. Great start. Don't rush into the sex. Let it build up slowly. Start with the kids and then bring Mom into it with them. |