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Comments from goiko
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-05-26 21:04:20 | Reece's Bigger Pieces Part 2 | Not too bad but have him exercise his powers more. Adjusting bodies and sex is good but don't stop there. There is so much he could do for the world instead of being selfish. Absolute power corrupts absolutely, don't take him that way. Noble is better. |
| 2015-05-28 15:12:01 | Newfound Powers Chapter 4: Recreation | I like the way you're taking it slow. No obsession with sex or incest at this point. Very good. I see several chapters with him getting and mastering powers. Just don't make him an ass please. Leave him somewhat humble. I hope you will let him do something great with his powers. |
| 2015-05-31 15:54:56 | Sexual Incest Accounts #1 | "A real life writing if my own personal experience of incest." This is one example why you need to spell check your work. You need to proofread your work before you submit it. |
| 2015-06-11 14:48:23 | Looking after Sister Pt 2 | I should have realized by the plastic on the bed what was going to happen. I really don't like water sports but your effort wasn't bad. I might even read another part but I have a feeling scatology is coming next. |
| 2015-06-12 14:13:41 | Lisa Lopez's | Well 304 lover you needed to transfer that file to your computer and spell check it. Obviously your fingers were too big for your phone's keyboard or you just can't spell. Edit, spell check and re-post. Then I'll try to re-read it. |