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Comments from goiko
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-06-13 12:59:51 | Dc Universe-Rise of a Hero pt 2_(1) | Liked both parts so far. Some minor spelling mistakes but easily fixed with better proof reading. Next chapter please. |
| 2015-06-13 13:08:18 | Sharing Phone Time ch 1 | I like where this is going. Heep the plot just as it is, slow seduction. |
| 2015-06-15 17:37:59 | mind break chapter 2 | A positive rating because I like mind control stories. Now the bad news. Please proofread your work. Get an editor and let them go over your work. The plot is good and thought out but the errors make it hard to read. Even so I'm looking forward to the next part. |
| 2015-06-21 18:18:27 | Just Like Clockwork. Part 1 | I won't rate your work yet. The plot has been reworked several times but that's not my reason. Since you admit there has been a while between stories, I'm going to let you do part two first. If the slight grammar errors are cleaned up I'll rate your work. Right now a rating would not be fair in my opinion. Do part two. Fix any errors before posting and we'll see. |
| 2015-06-21 18:22:51 | my first time with my stepmom and aunt_(1) | Way too many spelling and grammar errors. Some paragraphs too long. Please rewrite. |