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Comments from goiko
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-08-11 17:56:56 | fucking my friend's stepmom | Usual seduction story. Horny wife obviously not be satisfied and needs a fuck. More plot please. Why did she need a dick? Does her husband satisfy her? |
| 2015-09-03 15:56:58 | Night Shift Sissy | I liked it very much. Not the usual blackmail story. Maybe we could get a part two? |
| 2015-09-15 15:51:37 | The power of the wishing lollies | Not familiar with your work but you're right. It's not very good. Only because I like mind control stories did I give it a positive. Please go back and rethink your plot. Give us some background on who and what gave him these abilities. How many packs of lollies does he have? Will he get more when they run out? He needs to explore exactly how long each application lasts. I hope part two is better than the first. Also what about his home life? There are many plots to explore with your story. Good luck. |
| 2015-10-17 13:34:37 | little sister becomes my cum dump part 1 | Yes there were spelling and grammar errors but I can live with those. My pet peeve is tit size. Why double D? Why large tits in most stories? I like medium and smalls myself. Not complaining just saying. |
| 2016-01-21 21:38:12 | Family Time. Part 1 | If your next chapter is like this one there should NOT be another. Please get some editing help and resubmit the first chapter. Add more content. Better paragraphs and grammar. |