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Comments from goiko
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-01-21 21:43:26 | Chosen by the Phoenix_(2) | I usually like mind control stories but I couldn't finish yours because I could not read it, Bad grammar, too long paragraphs and spelling errors stopped me from enjoying your work. Please fix these things and resubmit your work, then work on chapter two. |
| 2016-01-21 21:51:23 | Fine line part 1 | Great start but needed more content. Break up the paragraphs more. The only other thing I might add is if you want the sister and dad involved, please don't. Keep it between mom and son. The sneaking around will make it better and hotter |
| 2016-01-27 00:03:25 | Fahima Ch.02 | Although I liked this essay I'm confused. I was expecting a continuation from the incest story which I liked and wanted a part two. This one is completely different with no introduction of how this situation came to happen. I think we need a prequel for part two. |
| 2016-01-27 00:04:45 | Fahima Ch.02 | Me again. Sorry I got the stories confused. never mind my comments. |
| 2016-02-24 17:18:24 | me and my son | Please edit and repost. Grammar skills are terrible. Separate paragraphs please. |