| 2014-12-13 10:26:21 |
Hot Box
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an absolutely incredible start to what I hope is going to be an epic series.... |
| 2014-12-13 10:48:45 |
The Accident: New Life Chapter 1
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A very interesting start, looking forward to more from you. DEFINATELY AN INTRIGUING CONCEPT, where can you not go with this? |
| 2014-12-13 02:21:03 |
Revenge, Pt 5: The Red Mist Decends_(0)
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Teenage angst, s and m, teen stupidity, absolute turn offs, I agree with previous comment, bloody boring... |
| 2014-09-09 08:32:39 |
The old ex, the new slave. Chapter 1
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Congratulations to the author, A WELL THOUGHT OUT STORY, just an idea, but, have the comments restricted to members, that way it might stop a lot of people who are using this site to try and pick up a stray bit of fluff on the side, also you will get a lot more response from genuine readers.. |
| 2016-05-25 03:25:48 |
Body of a Man, Mind of Machine - Chapter Three_(1)
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CONGRATS TO YOU ON THIS CHAPTER SAGE, MUCH BETTER WRITTEN THAN THE PREVIOUS CHAPTERS.. |