| 2015-01-24 23:55:34 |
Luck and Love: X
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Out of 10 chapters only 3 or 4 are worth reading, the other 6 should have been condensed down to 3, far too short, otherwise the story is REASONABLE, barely, not bothering with the rest though... |
| 2015-02-07 02:31:56 |
The Ticket
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a reasonabe story up to chap 9, after that it is just rubbish, too many characters and loses the entire plot... |
| 2015-02-07 03:11:40 |
The Way of The War part 3
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definitely not making much sense at the moment, but I will persevere for 1 or 2 more chapters, if does not change I wil,, l Definitely,, shoot a rocket up you arse. |
| 2015-02-07 03:48:51 |
The Way of the War pt 5
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no rocket up your arse yet wolf. starting to get interesting now, still quite a few mistakes but nothing that cant be improved on. |
| 2015-02-07 06:05:03 |
My best sexstories
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If this is your best effort I would hate to thing about your worst |