| 2015-03-27 00:08:54 |
The Perks of Being a Wallflower with a Huge Cock, Parts I thru VIII
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I ONLY READ LESS THAN A 1/4 OF THIS AND FOUND IT TO BE BORINGLY REPETITIOUS, NO REAL PLOT, JUST OVER EXAGERATED GARBAGE, |
| 2015-03-07 21:57:31 |
Revenge pt 3 - The Double Bluf
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This story now seems to be losing its cohesion,, doubts and confusion coming into it.. natural but disappointing. |
| 2015-03-07 22:38:07 |
Revenge pt 4 - The Hail Mary_(1)
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I fully agree with the first comment on this chapter, you are definitely going over the top, this now is just sadism. |
| 2015-03-07 23:05:43 |
Revenge, Pt 5: The Red Mist Decends_(1)
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this story is just getting worse every chapter, think I will leave it alone before you put her in hospital or kill her, true S and M has its limits, but you have gone way too far with it, just rubbish now. |
| 2015-03-08 04:51:00 |
The Lady Commands
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I did not even get past the first TWO PARAGRAPHS with this shit. |