| 2015-05-26 21:17:56 |
Growin up with the Martin Girls
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interesting, but not worth the 100 rating, for me I would say 50 at the most. |
| 2015-05-26 21:57:05 |
A Family Betrayal Chapter 24
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this point of view garbage at the end of chapters spoils the whole story, |
| 2015-05-26 22:11:44 |
Paranormal Lewd and Sexual Misconduct Department: Chapter 1
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what a load of nonsensical garbage |
| 2015-05-30 23:34:12 |
A Family Betrayal Chapter 25
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Sorry hawk, but to me it seems that you are letting the sex take over the story, so much so that the plot and characters are just getting all mixed up, the story now is nonsensical, also, the alternative point of views are, really, really spoiling the story, as they seem to have no real reason to be there. |
| 2015-05-31 23:15:01 |
Twin Japanese Nieces Pt15_(1)
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what a load of rubbish, if this story were true you would be in a fed pen doing life for underage sex, and being screwed every hour,, at the least try and make it somewhat believable. |