| 2015-07-14 22:57:19 |
Subjects 0 - CH 2_(1)
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sorry DB, but this story has gone from the sublime to the bloody ridiculous, definitely NOT up to your normal standard. |
| 2015-07-18 22:24:28 |
As A Song, Forever Together Chapter1
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absolutely boring story, and badly written. |
| 2015-07-19 02:06:00 |
This Story Is About Cindy 1:1 - 1:2_(1)
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A reasonable effort, but you really need to flesh out the characters and story lot more. As i have commented before to other writers, a 5 minute read does NOT a story make... |
| 2015-07-19 04:23:03 |
The Challenge_(0)
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this is so drawn out that I have lost any interest that I had for it, and I was very interested... |
| 2015-07-19 04:26:42 |
Best Night EVER_(2)
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a 2 minute read is not a story worth reading. |