| 2015-04-11 08:00:12 |
The New Life (Prologue)
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got completely bored with this story, I read for about 15 minutes and nearly fell asleep, too much angst and very slow, too bloody slow, could have left most of the story out and probably MIGHT have been worth reading.. |
| 2015-04-13 04:30:22 |
A Wisard I Am 2
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what a stuffed up story, don't bother with anymore of it, just bloody rubbish... |
| 2015-04-15 21:34:30 |
Raising Peter, Chapter Nine
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sorry trebor, but you have lost me after chapter 8, too much going on and no plot, just gangbang sex for the sake of sex, really spoilt what was a reasonable story.. |
| 2015-05-21 21:02:42 |
My New Life 2: The Next Morning
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Your talent as a writer is amazing, I really enjoyed reading this, keep up the standard and you will become one of the most readable, and appreciated, writers on this site, VERY WELL DONE. |
| 2015-05-25 22:55:27 |
Luck and Love: IX
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What a load of garbage, ruined what could have been a good ending to this story, took you 8 chapters to get a reasonable story and ruined it with this one... |