| 2015-03-11 03:28:30 |
Light of Hellfire: Part 2
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sorry sage, but this story has gone from the sublime, to ridiculous, and finally to just garbage, definitely NOT up to your usual standards. |
| 2015-03-27 01:24:10 |
Real Drake and Niki manaj Sex Tape_(4)
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WHAT THE HELL IS THIS GARBAGE? WHO GIVES A SHIT ABOUT NICKI MINAG? |
| 2015-03-27 01:33:15 |
New Family Rules 1
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WRITING FROM AN ADULTS POINT OF VIEW AND NOT IMPRESSED WITH THE OTHER COMMENTS, PERSONALLY TO ME IT IS A RATHER WEAK STORY... |
| 2015-03-27 01:38:12 |
The forgotten heroes - Chapter One "The adventure begins."
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WRITING A STORY IN THE THIRD PERSON STYLE IS NOT VERY GOOD TO READ, WOUD HAVE READ BETTER AS FIRST PERSON... |
| 2015-03-07 05:41:09 |
Emma and her Mom, (Chap 4)
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As usual, as good a start to this story as all the others, you are a prolific writer, and to me at least, one of the best on this site, good health to you and yours... |