| 2016-02-22 22:22:27 |
Aunt Nancy Comes To Town
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I started to read this, then realised that it was a build up to nothing, so switched off, a waste of time for me, damned if I know how this got a 90% plus rating. |
| 2016-02-22 22:45:12 |
Seed of Horror: Chapter 1_(1)
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what the hell is this garbage? |
| 2016-02-23 04:12:11 |
Control yourself! - Training a mage in the modern world
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what about punctuation? no commas or full stops, makes this story into nonsensical rubbish. |
| 2016-02-23 04:31:14 |
In to the darkness part 1
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TRUE STORY? never in a million years. just garbage. |
| 2016-02-24 20:32:33 |
Maid with Benefits (Part 1)
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definitely not the best story that I have read, but a reasonable attempt. should get better with more experience. |