2016-02-26 18:07:19 |
The Royal Genies - Chapter 03
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sorry to have to write this DRAGO, but this has to be the worst story that you have written, absolute garbage. |
2016-02-26 18:30:19 |
My Teacher...My Tease...Her Control
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please cut the French language, makes the story just too hard to read. |
2016-03-01 21:05:59 |
A Shemale Fantasy and my wife (Part 4)
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1 thing only wrong with this story. Needs to be fleshed out a lot more, longer and more action and plot to the story. HOWEVER,, A GOOD START FOR A NEW BUDDING WRITER... |
2016-02-29 20:40:08 |
Comic-Con Adventure pt 1?
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I really hope that you are NOT going to be a one hit wonder type of writer, this is a well thought out story and to me seems very well done. THANK YOU VERY MUCH, |
2016-03-06 21:48:04 |
Adventures of a Realty Diva
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such a shame that you stopped writing for this site, none of your stories with episodes are finished. they are a good read and reasonably thought out... |